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中高考阅卷老师揭秘——英语作文这样写才能拿高分

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写英语作文,总是会不经意的蹦出一系列类似口语化的简单表述,于是就被阅卷老师认定为英语水平不那么高…为了让阅卷老师见识到我们的“真实水平”着实需要下一番功夫,比如可以从把简单句变“高级”开始。

中高考阅卷老师揭秘——英语作文这样写才能拿高分(图1)

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形式 “活” 起来

插入 在句中插入某些成分,起补充、说明作用。最明显的特征是入成分前后都用逗号隔开。

You and I are teenagers. It offers teenagers a chance. We can enjoy sports and learn about Chinese culture.

It offers teenagers, like you and me, a chance to enjoy sports and learn about Chinese culture.

嵌入在某一分句中嵌入另一分句,构成句中句。最常见的情况是:定语从句嵌入宾语从句中、感叹句嵌入宾语从句中、名词性从句嵌入强调句型中。

We are told something. We doubt whether it is true. We are in the habit of raising doubts. We can find the correct answer. We can learn more.

If we are in the habit of raising doubts as to whether what we are told is true, we can find the correct answer and learn more.

前置 将正常词序下通常较晚出现的成分移至句首,使之处于突出的位置从而受到特殊的强调,这种手段为前置。

I really want to obtain this precious opportunity. I will be able to improve my organizational ability, communication skills as well as my confidence in speaking English in public by offering my service.

I really want to obtain this precious opportunity because, by offering my service, I will be able to improve my organizational ability, communication skills as well as my confidence in speaking English in public.

后置 在遣词造句时将最重要的内容置于句尾,使之处于突出地位,这种手段为后置。故造句时应避免头重脚轻,注意句子结构的匀称。在名词性从句中,借助it作形式主语或形式宾语,将真正的主语或宾语后置;在同位语从句中,主语太长而谓语太短,将同位语从句后置;使用全部倒装,将主语后置。

The test will enhance the examinees consciousness of health. On the contrary it will also be more likely to result in over anxiety. People all said that.

It“s said that the test will enhance the examinee”s consciousness of health, but on the contrary it will also be more likely to result in over anxiety.

同位对与之同位的名词或短语补充说明的成分称之为同位语,可以是一个词也可以是一个完整的句子。为表示同位概念,也可使用连接性状语namely / thats / in other words / such as 等,还可使用破折号表示。

DNA test is a new technique. It is done by analyzing the saliva sample. It appears in the foreign medical industry.

DNA test, a new technique, which is done by analyzing the saliva sample, appears in the foreign medical industry.

内容 “实” 起来

01 词汇的升级

(1) I think that reading is important.

→ I deem that reading is essential / fundamental.

→ I argue that reading really matters /counts.

→ I maintain that reading is crucial.

→ I hold that reading is significant /primary / critical.

(2) We can look at this problem in many ways.

→ We can view this problem in many facets / aspects / respects.

02 单词和短语巧妙互用

(1) I think that reading is important.

→ I hold the belief that reading plays an important role in our life.

→ I harbor the opinion that reading is of vital importance.

→ I hold the position that reading means a great deal to our life.

→ I am under the impression that nothing is more crucial to our life than reading.

→ From my perspective, reading is to our life what water is to fish.

→ As far as I am concerned, the importance of reading to our life can never be exaggerated / denied / ignored / doubted.

(2) I will never forget the pleasant experience.

→ The pleasant experience leaves a deep impression on me.

→ The pleasant experience is deeply / firmly rooted in my memory.

→ The pleasant experience will never be fading from my mind / memory.

(3) I sincerely hope that you will consider my suggestions.

→ It is my sincere hope that you will take my proposals into account /consideration.

(4) Quite a few things caused the traffic accident.

→ Quite a few things triggered the traffic accident.

→ Quite a few things gave rise to the traffic accident.

→ Quite a few things lead to / result in the traffic accident.

(5) I love reading.

→ I am crazy about / fond of / into /feel like reading.

→ I possess great interest in reading.

→ Reading exerts a tremendous fascination on me.

→ I am obsessed with reading.

→ I am captured by reading.

03短语的升级

(1)try to do sth→ take pains to do sth→ do one’s utmost to do sth→ exhaust every effort in one’s power to do sth→ spare no effort to do sth→ go all out to do sth

If I am lucky enough to be chosen to become a volunteer, I will do my utmost to serve the children in the remote areas.I will spare no effort to build the hope into a bridge between the children in the remote areas and the volunteers like me.In order to make it a better place for us and children, I will exhaust every effort in my power.

(2)have to→be forced to do sth→be obliged to do sth→ have no choice but to do sth→have no alternative but to do sth

Some poor students have to do some part-time jobs to earn money in order to continue their education.Some poverty-stricken students have no choice but to do some part-time jobs to earn money in order to continue their education.

本文相关词条概念解析:

后置

后置,解释:一语法成分的后放。

嵌入

嵌入是一个多义词,1.生物学术语:放线菌素、氨基吖啶等分子插入并结合到DNA链中相邻的碱基对之间,使DNA螺旋倒扭18°,以致增大了原为0.34纳米左右的碱基对的螺距,使整个分子的粘度增加,从而引起DNA的变性。由于这种机制放线菌素能抑制核酸的合成2.汉语词汇

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